The Soup
FADE IN:
1 INT. KITCHEN – DAY - SHOWS A BIG POT OF SOUP
AMARA (V.O.)
My mother said to close my eyes, and picture my life as a big empty pot of soup. I am the pot, and the fire burning underneath it represents the breath sustaining my existence. And like every pot that requires ingredients to make a soup, the people I come in contact with through my journey in life are the ingredients I need to make my soup. And by soup it could represent my ambition, friendships, love life, or for whatever cause it may be. Some are like onions they hurt my eyes but they give just that flavor, some are the spices I need to sauce things up, others like pepper, ginger, garlic, etcetera, the point is none are indispensable, and however sweet or sour they play their part in my life, I need them.
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2 INT. DRESSING ROOM – DAY
AMARA (26), looking beautiful yet exhausted, trying to take off the chef whites she had on, and then her phone rings...
AMARA
Hello!
(pauses and looks around to see if the other ladies in the room were looking at her)
AMARA
(into phone)
Oh hi there, stranger from the night.
(pauses)
Of course how could I forget?
I just finished from the
volunteering stuff I told
you about.
-looks back again a few seconds and then continues...
AMARA
Well you could come pick me up
at my place or I could just come
by yours to save you the hustle.
(Pauses)
Alright then, 7:30 it is, bye.
(hangs up the phone with a smile and then turns back, but is startled by CANDY(25) her best friend, (a little crazy yet sensitive), looking over her shoulder.
AMARA
What are you doing!
Spying on me?
CANDY
Darling, I don’t have to spy on you
all I have to do is type in that little
password of yours and I get all the information
I want.
(astonished)
That’s impossible,
you’re merely teasing.
CANDY
(laughs hysterically)
Okay then, whatever you say.
-strolls majestically ahead of AMARA towards the backdoor exit.
CANDY
So, I suppose you’ll
need to borrow my Red Chanel
clutch to match that red dress
of yours, for the Chef pimenter
restaurant?
-overwhelmed by CANDY’S response she places her right hand over her head and then the two women enter into a car waiting outside.
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3 EXT. IN FRONT OF AMARA’S HOUSE–NIGHT
AMARA is all dressed up, standing outside her house waiting for her date, meanwhile CANDY sits by the front porch eating ice cream.
CANDY
It’s been over 30 minutes now and
this happens to be my second refill
(lifting her ice cream bowl up)
AMARA
(sneeringly)
It’s not my fault you’re a glutton!
CANDY
(chuckles)
Well, they don’t close the
gates till after midnight,
so I guess we’ll see.
AMARA
(frustrated)
Dude! Would you shut up?
Are you the one with the date here
No! That’s what I thought.
My date, my wait!
CANDY
(sarcastic)
Sorry! You don’t need to be so salty.
Am just trying to keep you company
till you decide to come back inside.
AMARA
(shakes her head and pulls away)
Unbelievable! They give it freedom,
and it behaves like a savage.
CANDY
Savage or not, he’s not coming
And even if he did, you’ll have to be
a fool to go with him after making
you wait this long.
AMARA
(looking relentless, her jaws up)
He’ll be here, you’ll see.
CANDY
Typical AMA, I thought
I was the needy one
Good luck!
-CANDY stands to go inside the house.
After an hour, a white Benz pulls over AMARA’S house, AMARA is already dosed off by a palm tree. Then a light skin casually dressed male walks towards her and strokes her hair, he was DUKE (32), her date.
AMARA
(wakes up)
You.
DUKE
I know, am so sorry.
I can’t even begin
to make up a story
to let you know
how sorry I am.
AMARA
You could try,
I mean, you have to.
DUKE
(squints)
Honestly?
AMARA
If you can!
DUKE
I forgot
(draws a little bit away from her)
AMARA
(disappointed)
You forgot, Wow!
Thank you for making
me realize how forgettable I am.
Come to think of it you called me
so how the hell could you forget.
DUKE
I know it’s such a flimsy reason
but it’s the truth.
I went from having a board
meeting, to filling in for
a colleague who called in sick
for a contract proposal meeting
he was supposed to attend to.
AMARA
(unyielding)
Such wonderful story, if only I cared
(stands and walks towards the door)
DUKE
(follows her and grabs her arm)
You have to AMA,
am really repentant here.
AMARA
(agitated)
What do you want from me then?
It’s already what,
(pulls his hand up to check his watch)
past 12 in the morning. I don’t even know
why you came here anyway.
Well I guess at least you
woke me up to go inside
saving me from being robbed
or worse, raped!
DUKE
(exhausted)
I am deeply sorry
If you want me to say
it a hundred times, I will
am sorry, am sorry, am sorry
am really sorry.
AMARA
(opens the door and turns back at him)
Call me tomorrow, perhaps
by then I feel much merciful.
(pauses)
I hope you forget.
(shuts the door)
DUKE
(leans over the door)
Goodnight!
DUKE returns to his car and gives a sigh of relief, his phone rings; he looks at his side mirror and then picks the call.
DUKE
(smiles)
Guy! I was just about to call you.
Phone- so how did it go?
DUKE
Mehn! That was a really close one
for real you know.
I guess that’s what happens
when you have more than
one sugar pie
(laughs).
Phone –What about Abby?
DUKE
(sneers)
What about her?
I mean asides going over and
beyond to make sure she drained my
wallet for the night, I think
I’ll be seeing her a little
while from now.
Phone –I told you before, such games would
take a toll on you sooner or later.
DUKE
(smirks)
Well I suppose we’ll have to
wait to later then.
Phone –Typical DUKE, see me giving advice
to an unchanged man!
DUKE
(laughs)
Martin Luther, Whatever you say.
-he drives off.
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4 INT. LIVING ROOM – DAY
AMARA is sitting on the couch, constantly staring at her phone beside her, CANDY observing from behind walks in.
CANDY
No artist management today?
-AMARA ignores her
CANDY
He still hasn’t called?
AMARA
(whispers)
No.
CANDY
Look, I know am no therapist
neither am I of any proper
standard for you to know better.
But in a case like this it’s not
hard to tell you’re holding on to
thin air.
AMARA
(stands)
You’re right,
(pauses)
You’re not a proper standard
(walks out of the room).
CANDY
(talks in a louder tone)
Okay then! You know I’ll
be here for you either ways.
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5 EXT. MASSIVE BUILDING –DAY
AMARA pulls over outside a huge building, only to be met by BUDAA (29) the reggae artist she managed. Offensively charming, dark, tall, rough and troublesome looking man, standing right in front of her car in a pose for a fight. She initially hesitates but later slowly comes out of her car and walks towards him.
AMARA
(trying to avoid confrontation)
What’d I miss?
BUDAA
(sneers)
So you decide when you want
to show up and am just supposed
to be unheated about that situation?
(his hands folded and jaws high up).
AMARA
(confused)
What! Unnn..(stutters)
It’s not even like that.
BUDAA
Look! (draws her to the side, placing
his hand over her shoulder)
I know you’re supposed to be some
expert and graduate of some degree.
But the point is, I don’t want you
to get it twisted that you’re very
dispensable. That’s of course if you
let me get on my cynical side.
AMARA
I understand.
-uncomfortable his hand was over her shoulders she frowns, as they both walk into the building.
BUDAA
Good! By the way you smell funny
(sniffing into her hair)
What’s that? Pride
-AMARA, initially alarmed by his comment shoves but then after his last word is irately relieved.
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6 EXT. A STAGE SET –DAY
BUDAA is on a stage testing the microphone, while AMARA sits at a corner going through her phone, then she gets a call from her mother, MAMA JU(69),fierce but loving.
AMARA
(tilts her head slightly down to
avoid the stage noise)
Hey! Mama JU.
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INT. MAMA JU’S KITCHEN
MAMA JU
(worried)
Hello darling!
The networks been real terrible
since yesterday I’ve been trying
to reach out to you.
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AMARA
(smiles)
Oh yeah, I also did plan on
coming over by the weekend,
if that’s okay.
MAMA JU
(exhales)
Since when have my four walls
been a place of contemplation
or need for approval before you
visited? after all I did raise
you and your sibling in it.
AMARA
(smiles)
I know, am only trying to be modest
and besides you need your privacy too.
MAMA JU
Indeed! Or you’re only trying to spare
me the disappointment when you decide
not to show up.
AMARA
I wouldn’t, I need the visit more
than to bail out last minute. I have
some things I want you to help clear off
my chest. I know you always have the right
words to soothe me, and plus (rolls her eyes)
CANDY has really been on my bad side
for days now.
MAMA JU
(chuckles)
Funny you’ll say that, because she
said just the same thing about you,
except in her words, you were making her
crazy, like a mama bear trying to protect
her cub.(laughs)
AMARA
I am not surprised, that’s her way of
playing good guy. She didn’t even give
me the opportunity to talk to you first.
MAMA JU
I suppose she beat you to it.
But frankly speaking she did seem worried.
Saying something about you acting a bit
needy and fixated on fixing what’s
already broken, she was quite the poet.
AMARA
(astonished)
She said that! What a loud mouth.
Like she knows any better.
MAMA JU
There is no crime in not knowing any better.
The strength is in realizing you don’t know
any better, and being open enough to find
help to know better.
AMARA
(slides back on the chair)
I hear you MAMA JU.
I’ll make sure to clear things up by
Friday and let you know about Saturday.
Meanwhile AMARA notices a couple of offensively dressed ladies usher into the set, she is perturbed as to their access into the building, let alone their business in the premises. She gives the guard at the entrance a questioning look and then stands to sort the situation out.
AMARA
MAMA JU, can I call you later?
I have to get back to work.
MAMA JU
Alright darling, take it easy
Bye.
AMARA
(races towards the ladies and stops them)
Hey ladies! What’s going on here?
The show doesn’t start till 10:30.
-BUDAA sees AMARA holding up the ladies and yells from the stage.
BUDAA
Hey! Hey AMA what’s going on down there?
AMARA
(her arms and legs wide open)
I have it all under control, you
just keep doing your thing.
BUDAA
Well, how am I supposed to do my thing?
when you’re holding my accessories up.
AMARA
(frantically turns to him)
You knew about this?
BUDAA
(sighs)
You damn right I knew about it?
This is my show, case you forgot.
AMARA
(upset)
You don’t need these types
of accessories BUDAA.
You’re a sophisticated R&B
reggae artiste not a
street thug.
BUDAA
(sneers)
Dude! What’d I tell you about
getting on my dark side?
Would you do the job you’re paid
to and let these beautiful
(starts dancing),
sexy, wonderful, divinely
blessed ladies do theirs.
AMARA
(furious)
But this is wrong. And mind you,
(starts to increase her tone)
It’s also my job to see you chase
proper standards as it best enhances
your artistry.
BUDAA
(walking towards her)
Bla bla bla bla! So many big words.
You know what your problem is?
Come closer (waves for her to come)
and let me hear you say what.
- she starts regressing backwards.
BUDAA
Come on, say it!
AMARA
(reluctantly whispers)
What!
BUDAA
You’re too damn sensitive.
AMARA
(smiles contemptuously)
Really, really! Thank you very much.
Really thank you, I sure hope that
helps boost your moral negligence,
I mean don’t mind me, ride on sire.
BUDAA
Face it AMARA, You’re not upset because
I brought these ladies here. Rather, you
find their confidence offending cause it’s
an attribute you could never consciously
or unconsciously possess.
Not even as an act or role play.
AMARA
(angry)
I don’t need to listen to this
hogwash, in fact you are way out
of line comparing me to your sluts!
(starts to walk away)
- The ladies echo their disapproval
BUDAA
(laughs, turning around to draw the others attention)
What did I say; she’s as soft as feather
Bye AMA! (waves through the air)
-The ladies join in the laughter while the men watched.
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7 INT. LIVING ROOM –NIGHT
AMARA walks tiredly into the living room, CANDY is by her laptop acting oblivious like she hadn’t noticed AMARA walk in. AMARA slams her full body on the couch with her bag and half worn shoes falling freely. She takes one slighter look at CANDY who still remained inattentive. Soon CANDY decides to retreat from her little work station and then before she heads up the few stairs to her room, she utters a simple sentence.
CANDY
(quietly)
I left you some food
in the microwave
Goodnight.
-AMARA watches her go up the stairs, her phone rings and its DUKE; she doesn't take a second glance at it before she slams it back on the couch followed by a quiet sigh.
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8 EXT. FRONT PORCH – DAY
AMARA is sitting on a wooden chair sipping on tea looking at nothing exactly; meanwhile CANDY comes down the stairs in her night clothes looking around for AMARA. She goes into the kitchen to grab herself a coffee and notices the untouched food in the microwave. She's alarmed, looking upset she walks back into the living room (pauses) and then heads toward the entrance as she hears AMARA exchange greetings with a neighbor outside. She opens the door and suddenly bursts into a mixture of grumbling and exaggerated expression, something like a sanguine.
CANDY
(upset)
AMA! Please don't tell me were fighting,
you know how much I hate fights, please
don’t be mad at me I was only looking out
for you, as a best friend should.
(slightly sitting on the arm of AMARA'S chair)
AMARA
(insensitive)
I don’t care! Since you have a big mouth
Then I suggest you grow a gut with it.
Cause you know I clearly can put up
with whatever.
CANDY
AMA please don’t say that, you know
how much I hate my siblings, you're more
like my sister than my friend.
(firmly embracing AMARA)
AMARA
(draws away)
Ok! Enough trying to choke me.
You’re back again with the same pattern
you act all crazy for a minute and
then later you're so sorry you did.
CANDY
(acts childlike)
Typical CANDY!
AMARA
(instructively)
And about what
you said to MAMA JU,
totally out of line,
you do not do that
ever again!
CANDY
(holds her lips together)
Absolutely out of line
never happen again.
-AMARA stands speechless.
CANDY
Can we play chess now?
If it'll make you feel better
I'll let you win
(smiles mischievously).
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9 INT.GROCERY STORE – LATER THAT DAY
AMARA and CANDY are at the grocery store getting some provisions from the shelves; CANDY was on the other aisle getting her own things. Just as she (AMARA) is about to take a wine bottle from the top shelf (struggling), a strange man from behind her takes it off before she could reach it. Surprised she turns back in a frenzied look, but later is relaxed as apparently she knew the strange man, her neighbor PEACE, dark, tall, goofy looking man smiling at her.
AMARA
(laughs)
Oh my goodness! Trust me, I was about
to go crazy lady on the aisle on you.
Where have you been?
PEACE
(smiles)
Well I think I ought to be the one
asking you that.
(putting the wine back on the shelf),
But since you asked, I'd say am where
we left off.
CUT TO:
- FLASH SCENE
INT. PEACE'S LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Shows AMARA and PEACE rush into his living room as the two engage in a drunken state romance.
CUT BACK TO:
INT.GROCERY STORE – DAY
AMARA
(looks up at the wine he placed back on the shelf)
I actually wanted that.
PEACE
You should try this instead
more strong than that
(grabs her another wine).
- AMARA stares intensely at his every move, looking lost in wild imagination.
AMARA
(regains herself)
It’s not even like that
I tried to keep in touch.
PEACE
You don’t say!
Seemed to me more like
you’ve been running from me.
AMARA
(bluffs his statement)
Now why would I have to do that?
I’ve just been really caught up in
a lot of activities, that’s all.
PEACE
(nods profusely)
Okay, I hear you
I forgive you.
AMARA
(smiles)
Well, thank you!
See you around, neighbor
(starts to move away)
PEACE
(blocks her)
Not just yet!
Since we’re back being pals,
I should invite you to the little
party am hosting at my house 8:30 Friday.
AMARA
(thinks for a minute)
Uhhmmmmm!
PEACE
(chuckles)
Come on, don’t play me with
the whole ‘I have to check
my schedule to see’ drama.
It’s not like you have anything
planned, I can tell.
AMARA
Excuse you! I’ll have you know
am a very occupied individual.
And since you want to be a smart ass,
Yes! I do have to check my schedule.
- both laugh hysterically
PEACE
So?
AMARA
(starts to walk away)
I’ll be there by 10.
-AMARA meets up with CANDY by the cashier; also she had been watching the pair all the while.
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10 INT.AMARA'S HOME – BEDROOM
AMARA is on her bed reading when she hears a voice calling from downstairs, at first she's reluctant but then the voice grew even louder, so she stands to check through the windows to see who it was. It was DUKE calling and yelling out her name, something like a ballad. She's elated but tries to hide it, it was clear she enjoyed the attention. CANDY walks in and sees her smiling from side to side as she looks down the window. CANDY is distraught, worried her friend was falling for the show.
CANDY
Are you seriously taken by this?
AMARA
(pretending)
No!
CANDY
Good! So I guess I should call
the estate guards to take him off
our property.
AMARA
(frowns)
What! No, you don’t have to.
Just let him be, probably he'll
leave when he's tired.
CANDY
(disappointed)
Probably! Sounds to me like you
hope he doesn't. You're enjoying
this aren't you?
AMARA
(walks back to the bed)
It’s not like he’s making
a scene or nothing.
CANDY
If you’re not going to send him
away, I will
(walks out of the door)
AMARA
(races to meet her)
CANDY! Don’t.
The two ladies race each other down the stairs. DUKE hearing the loud matching of legs down the stairs starts to regress in fear, thinking the ladies were out to get him, he hides behind his car. The ladies make it outside and what seemed like a simple race after each other became a tussle as both ladies draw each other by the hair, shouting and cursing.
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